CAN NOT MAKE MISTAKE ANYMORE. 10 points for your bounty helping me. Thank you so much.?
PLEASE HELP CHECK MY RESUME. I MADE MISTAKE ONCE AND DID NOT GET JOBS. I AM SO SAD. PLEASE HELP ME. THANK YOU...
OBJECTIVE Succeeding in a competitive business environment in which I can capitalize on my customer service skills and strong work ethic
EDUCATION
Master of Public Administration Graduation: May 2008
(Human Resources Management)
Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
G.P.A. 3.70/4.0
Bachelor of Arts within Political Science Graduation: May 2006
Edinboro University, Edinboro, PA
G.P.A. 3.21/4.0 (Completed 4-year program in 3 years)
WORK EXPERIENCE
Graduate Assistant to the Chair August 2006-Present
Department of Management, Marketing, and Public Administration Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
o Organizing conference/internship/scholarship opportunities
o Managing graduate students’ leader files and documents
o MPA program liaison
o Developing and updating department website
o Broadcasting information and scheduling courses on the university databases
o Conducting research for MBA program coordinator
Graduate Student Worker (Part-time) August 2004-February 2008 Edinboro University and Bowie State University Sodexho, USA
o Assisted the general managers contained by planning and organizing various restaurants on campus
o Provided strong troop work and support to achieve the goals of the company
o Ranked notably among the team for excellent service and strong sales
Intern May-August, 2005 The Royal Thai Embassy, Washington, D.C.
o Assisted the Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission (International Relations)
o Verified prescribed documents (passport, visa, naturalization, and legalization)
INTERNATIONAL ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Featured in the Bowie State University (HBCU) viewbook and website in “Spotlight” piece, Fall 2007
Organized and hosted “Women and Children in Japanese Society” Speech and Dinner, the guest speaker was the First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan surrounded by New York, Fall 2005.
Assisted the Thai Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission and organized “A Taste of Thailand” Gala Dinner, a benefit for the post-tsunami support of schools and living facilities for the orphans within Thailand, Summer 2005.
Served as the Vice President of the Asia Club at Edinboro University, organized an educational trip to Harvard University and Massachusetts Institute of Technology, Spring 2004.
AWARDS
Graduate Assistantship 2006-2008
SILVER Academic Award 2005-2006
Julie Lieber International Scholarship 2004-2005
ASSE International Exchange Program Scholarship, United States, 2002-2003
PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT TRAINING
o Member of Society for Human Resource Management 2007-2008
o Website Development Training September, 2007
o OSDBU Procurement Conference April, 2007
o Faculty Research and Scholarship Training Series March, 2007
SKILLS
Microsoft Office Applications (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook, Internet)
Research (Collecting, Managing, Analyzing, and Presenting Data)
Communication Skills (English and Thai)
References, Writing Samples, and Portfolios Available Upon Request
Answers: To long...one page..start cutting...
I didn't see any typos. But my righteousness, you speak Thai? I think that should be mentioned at the front of the resume
BTW - don't worry more or less getting it on 1 page. Few truly experienced candidates do.
i would get rid of the 'objective' portion. i have heard it isnt really called for. otherwise, seems good. if you can fit it on 1 page that would be flawless too though. You have some typos. Also it looks like you hav't graduate from your last ed. place ( mAy 2008)
Hope you have to swot to trust yourself and your skills. We can check now but who is going to check when you get the charge? a) What job are you applying for?
b) What skills, specifically, apply to the position you seek?
c) Be competent to answer specific questions about your behavior and ability that will be attractive to the employer.
For example, if you are seeking some kind of analyst position, you need to specifically state what you enjoy done on a particular project or function that added value to that project or function.
It's more something like the interview, but I would remove at least some of the "fluff" from my resume because you do not want to appear too self-aggrandizing, if not arrogant. You might want to consider situations where on earth you had to step out of the "limelight" and let other troop members' talents shine for the benefit of the project or event. This will demonstrate good judgement on your module in seeing beyond yourself into the bigger scheme of things ("The Big Picture").
Hope this help.
your resume is not organized. Most important is what do you want to do, what job do you want. Are you probing the various job boards for a livelihood or jobs. If you find a particular work add that you want to apply to which you have relevent experience do you taylor your resume surrounded by an organized fashion that shows your qualifications for that undertaking. You need to find a way to show on your resume what you did contained by previous employment to increase revenue. Maybe you came up with a better process. Your resume is long and boring. Most employer will have it in the trash by the in the middle point. Make it one page and spice it up by convincing the reader you can do that job.
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OBJECTIVE Succeeding in a competitive business environment in which I can capitalize on my customer service skills and strong work ethic
EDUCATION
Master of Public Administration Graduation: May 2008
(Human Resources Management)
Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
G.P.A. 3.70/4.0
Bachelor of Arts within Political Science Graduation: May 2006
Edinboro University, Edinboro, PA
G.P.A. 3.21/4.0 (Completed 4-year program in 3 years)
WORK EXPERIENCE
Graduate Assistant to the Chair August 2006-Present
Department of Management, Marketing, and Public Administration Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
o Organizing conference/internship/scholarship opportunities
o Managing graduate students’ leader files and documents
o MPA program liaison
o Developing and updating department website
o Broadcasting information and scheduling courses on the university databases
o Conducting research for MBA program coordinator
Graduate Student Worker (Part-time) August 2004-February 2008 Edinboro University and Bowie State University Sodexho, USA
o Assisted the general managers contained by planning and organizing various restaurants on campus
o Provided strong troop work and support to achieve the goals of the company
o Ranked notably among the team for excellent service and strong sales
Intern May-August, 2005 The Royal Thai Embassy, Washington, D.C.
o Assisted the Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission (International Relations)
o Verified prescribed documents (passport, visa, naturalization, and legalization)
INTERNATIONAL ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Featured in the Bowie State University (HBCU) viewbook and website in “Spotlight” piece, Fall 2007
Organized and hosted “Women and Children in Japanese Society” Speech and Dinner, the guest speaker was the First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan surrounded by New York, Fall 2005.
Assisted the Thai Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission and organized “A Taste of Thailand” Gala Dinner, a benefit for the post-tsunami support of schools and living facilities for the orphans within Thailand, Summer 2005.
Served as the Vice President of the Asia Club at Edinboro University, organized an educational trip to Harvard University and Massachusetts Institute of Technology, Spring 2004.
AWARDS
Graduate Assistantship 2006-2008
SILVER Academic Award 2005-2006
Julie Lieber International Scholarship 2004-2005
ASSE International Exchange Program Scholarship, United States, 2002-2003
PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT TRAINING
o Member of Society for Human Resource Management 2007-2008
o Website Development Training September, 2007
o OSDBU Procurement Conference April, 2007
o Faculty Research and Scholarship Training Series March, 2007
SKILLS
Microsoft Office Applications (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook, Internet)
Research (Collecting, Managing, Analyzing, and Presenting Data)
Communication Skills (English and Thai)
References, Writing Samples, and Portfolios Available Upon Request
Answers: To long...one page..start cutting...
I didn't see any typos. But my righteousness, you speak Thai? I think that should be mentioned at the front of the resume
BTW - don't worry more or less getting it on 1 page. Few truly experienced candidates do.
i would get rid of the 'objective' portion. i have heard it isnt really called for. otherwise, seems good. if you can fit it on 1 page that would be flawless too though. You have some typos. Also it looks like you hav't graduate from your last ed. place ( mAy 2008)
Hope you have to swot to trust yourself and your skills. We can check now but who is going to check when you get the charge? a) What job are you applying for?
b) What skills, specifically, apply to the position you seek?
c) Be competent to answer specific questions about your behavior and ability that will be attractive to the employer.
For example, if you are seeking some kind of analyst position, you need to specifically state what you enjoy done on a particular project or function that added value to that project or function.
It's more something like the interview, but I would remove at least some of the "fluff" from my resume because you do not want to appear too self-aggrandizing, if not arrogant. You might want to consider situations where on earth you had to step out of the "limelight" and let other troop members' talents shine for the benefit of the project or event. This will demonstrate good judgement on your module in seeing beyond yourself into the bigger scheme of things ("The Big Picture").
Hope this help.
your resume is not organized. Most important is what do you want to do, what job do you want. Are you probing the various job boards for a livelihood or jobs. If you find a particular work add that you want to apply to which you have relevent experience do you taylor your resume surrounded by an organized fashion that shows your qualifications for that undertaking. You need to find a way to show on your resume what you did contained by previous employment to increase revenue. Maybe you came up with a better process. Your resume is long and boring. Most employer will have it in the trash by the in the middle point. Make it one page and spice it up by convincing the reader you can do that job.